Heart Bleeds Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Heart Bleeds

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Well, ideas float like paper boat
When you have something to offer
Regardless of what you feel or think
That shall always elevate you and not sink

It may end in conclusion
Without any confusion
That it carries a weight
And feeling is right

You might be thinking
About country and always striking
With proposals
For arrival of happiness

The people are uppermost in mind
But they are poor and helpless of some kind
That bothers or occupies your space
You are worrying about human race

It is natural
On your part to feel human
Even if not in position
To build more for relation

Your heart bleeds
And needs
Someone's shoulder
To cry with tears

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Heart Bleeds Elana Kahn4 minutes ago The poem is a bit confusing for me, but there are some good descriptions and some parts evoke emotion.

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human Johnathan ChisomLess than a minute ago Made me feel human again... it brought me a feeling I was once familiar with long before I was the super humanoid I am today Comment

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Well, ideas float like paper boat When you have something to offer

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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