Heart Breaking Moments Poem by RoseAnn V. Shawiak

Heart Breaking Moments



Deportment of life is a solitary puzzle -
it cannot be completed.
Buildings and statues stand as memorials, but of what?
After people who've made them and those they were a
tribute to, have passed out of this life?
What of those close to us who have nothing erected in
concrete or sculpted stone?
People last forever, as long as each are etched in our
minds, felt in our hearts, tearfully remembered joyous
and saddened.
Especially at Christmas where most memories are sacredly
preserved, carefully tended, held unreservedly in hearts
of love.
Years have gone by, many friends and relatives - loved
ones - have passed on to heaven.
Those of us who are left have heartbreaking moments
during the holidays, because we miss those people who
have created the sacred moments of our lives at holiday gatherings.
Our traditions have been eternally built by them since
our birth and to not have them here with us is quite a struggle.
All on earth must at one time or another face this
truth in our lives and one day be the person passed on
who is missed.
Our lives are so very temporary, blessed with people
close to us, too soon leaving.
Tearfully, I write of these things as I miss my Mom at
Christmastime.
Joyous wonder of her heart missed so tremendously today,
one week til Christ's birthday.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 21 April 2018

(continued) .... Until, Till, or 'Til. Until indicates when something will happen, begin, or end. Till is not an abbreviation of until—it's actually older than until—and it should not be written with an apostrophe. 'Til turns up now and then, but major usage dictionaries and style guides consider it an error, so it's best to avoid it........i'm not saying it; Google is! ! i used to write 'til; now i write till or until. you wrote til. bri ;) good evening, 'RoseAnn'.

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Bri Edwards 21 April 2018

favorite lines so far: All on earth must at one time or another face this truth in our lives and one day be the person passed on who is missed....................shall more than some on PH miss Bri? i suppose so, but i hope to they are not saddened by my departure as i descend into the Abyss! ! ! :) i hope YOUR sadness over your mother's 'passing' has softened since this poem was submitted. to MyPoemList. (cont.) ..

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