Heart Is Not An Onion Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Heart Is Not An Onion

Rating: 5.0


Peeling away the layers of an onion,
that have been for years a companion,
avoid, in it are the frozen tears!

Past was a lovely and pleasing smile,
present is teasing and too fragile,
future doubtful, has so many fears!

Let the layers do their job and hide,
no core, just a sleeping dormant tide,
layers are keeping portraits of dears!

Heart is heart don't treat it as onions,
deposits are memoirs of friendly unions,
let the heart beat with all its gears!


(Source of Inspiration: -
Micropoem. - Poem by Marie Shine
Like an onion
a heart has many layers
Only love can peel them away
to reveal the core)

Heart Is Not An Onion
Thursday, December 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: heart
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 04 December 2015

Wow. So amazing definitely. Peeling out onion is humorous here. Yes heart is heart definitely. This beats spontaneously and conveys new born's message wonderfully. A marvelous work shared.10

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Valsa George 03 December 2015

Past was a lovely and pleasing smile, present is teasing and too fragile, future doubtful, has so many fears! Quite true! These lines give the sum of human life. After the beautiful years of childhood and youth, we enter the mid years of crisis and tension and wait for the uncertainty of old age.!

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Ruma Chaudhuri 03 December 2015

Excellent. I love to read it. Best wishes.

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