Heart Of Ice Poem by Taylor S
Heart Of Ice
Forever is a love long forgotten
In a heart made of ice
That can no longer feel
Joy for things has been lost
As the warm turns cold
For things long ago can not always be
Found in a heart of ice
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Steven Taylor
20 May 2009
you can do much better than this one, you lost me, however the first line is captivating, you should consider a rewrite
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4/24/2024 10:41:03 PM # 1.0.0.1119
This is a new rewrite of my old poem Heart of Ice which was: Forever is a love long forgotten In a heart made of ice A yearning to turn the aura Of gold to black For things long ago can not always be Found in a heart of ice