Heart Vice Poem by john silvia

Heart Vice



it hurts again
it started squeezing harder
it won't let up
and i try to pretend
i just smile louder
i won't let anyone know

it has begun constricting
it doesn't ever end
it won't ease up
i can't show that im hurting
this attack i can't begin to fend
i won't let anything show

it will make me lame
it leaves no oppening
it won't give up
i will never be the same
i am left only hoping
but if i die, will i go above or below?

am i to be trapt forever in this heart vice?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catherine Rica Cosico 28 June 2008

schemic heart attacks...like it! ! ! well crafted and the imagery is nice... Cate

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 June 2008

I liked the way you presented this poem and the simple words u used to convey great deapths of feeling. Well done. keep it up with best wishes, sathya narayana

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john silvia

john silvia

providence, rhode island
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