Heartbroken Poem by Neil Crosby

Heartbroken

Rating: 5.0


You saw my heartbreak
You never cared for me
My heart is gone, and you see
My heart hurts and aches
My heart is shattered
To you it never mattered
You only want me dead
I felt that dread
If you want me to die
I know you won't cry
You have no guilt in your mind
I want to commit suicide
Too late for a second chance
You broke that romance
Good bye
You should have guilt for your lie
In the end, my heart is broken, and I die.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anthony Zeigler 15 September 2009

Boy do i know how that feels. poem is awesome man. im sorry dude.

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Tyease Collins 07 February 2009

OMG the last like two lines were so GOOD. Geez i wish i would write like you. But yeah I've felt that depression of nobody wanting me, and i sometimes still feel it. But great poem -Tyease

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Demon lover 26 December 2008

Very Sad Neil. I'm Sorry Ur Hearts broken

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Ail Respicio 02 July 2008

great poem.its true, that i felt when i was heartbroken.i love this poem

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Neil Crosby

Neil Crosby

Fort Knox, Kentucky
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