Jack Abdallah

Rookie - 233 Points (August,25 / Parma, Ohio)

Heartbroken - Poem by Jack Abdallah

Lost and alone
My world against me
No light in sight
No one to lead me
Shaking I'm breaking
I'm falling to pieces
I fear my love grows
As hers decreases
Never felt so weak
And easily broken
Never thought words said
Are better unspoken
I'm crying I'm dying
Just lying on the floor
She draws me in closer
With me wanting more
Withering away
Attempt to apologize
She ignores me
Still me in disguise
Something is wrong
I feel it it's hurting
Deep in my heart
Fears grow tears bursting

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about Heartbroken by Jack Abdallah

  • Rookie - 199 Points Bartholomew A. B. Sarbah (4/28/2015 1:34:00 AM)

    hmmmm....its got a whole message to tell...when you love someone very much, you are likely to be affraid of losing her...hmmmm....we can not always help it though, but just wish that they never abandon us....nice writeup.... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 5 Points Nurain Ali-balogun (10/1/2012 1:45:00 AM)

    Exceptional, you were able to say much by not saying much. I like the 'your love increasing and hers decreasing' part. Good job (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, October 1, 2012

Poem Edited: Saturday, May 3, 2014

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