Isabella Francis

Rookie (18 June 1996 / India)

Heartless - Poem by Isabella Francis

I lay shrouded by blankets,
My shallow breathing could be heard in snippets.

I lay and wondered why was I still breathing,
Even though my heart had long stopped beating.

I had been rescued from drowning they say,
But why did you save me tell me I pray.

I tell you it was an accident,
But my conscience screams that it was a deliberate incident.

I felt the waves embrace me as I fell down in the sea,
Of all the ppl in this world it was chosen to be me.

I'd fought with it and won with a terrible mess,
The fight did all to me and left me heartless.

Comments about Heartless by Isabella Francis

  • Rookie isabella Francis (1/3/2012 7:35:00 AM)

    Thank you. for all your wonderful comments. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 13 Points Tavneet Singh (12/22/2011 1:01:00 AM)

    Good One to read, but painful it feels :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie cynthia gomez (11/3/2011 2:31:00 PM)

    this is a great poem. i like how it is. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Abhishek Tiwari (10/27/2011 12:01:00 AM)

    these are the extreme form of feelings...
    and the best thing is that you are perfectly successful in rolling them into words making a road which can be traveled by those who have the password of your heart.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, October 25, 2011

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 3, 2012

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