Hearts Poem by shirin sheikhi

Hearts

Rating: 5.0


At night sky seems
brilliantly spangled
by shiny stars
To those on earth
meanwhile there is no light
but at every single moment of time
earth seems illuminated
by some spectacular hearts
to those in the skies
meanwhile nowadays
earth is almost in the dark
even with this apparent light

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wali Jamali 06 January 2009

Great exhibition of humanism. Superb read, indeed.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 08 January 2009

earth still moves with spectacular heaerts darkness would disappear when brilliant sun would come.....quite evocatively humanistic, well penned,10++++, thanks for sharing

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Reihaneh Jalalian 13 January 2009

Shirin it really was wonderful, i loved it. i guess u r right earth is dark when u look down but there r still some people that light up the earth with their smile exactly like the stars in the sky.

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Hamed Pooyan 20 January 2009

theme of your poem is bitter despite of your name! but i love it! sadly it's real and we must see to it and sherraged! keep on please!

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 January 2009

My heart is awlays enlightened by the bright side of the earth, the most beautiful home............created by God.

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 August 2015

earth is almost in the dark even with this apparent light... a realization that almost all poets make you have written down Shirin thank you

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Wabi Sabi 09 February 2012

nice message! i like it! ! dramatically well-written!

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Kazi Ahmed 27 September 2011

'apparent light '______very symbolic. Real poetic.Thanks.++10.

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Anil Kumar Panda 27 July 2011

beautiful write.wordplay and flow is nice.liked it.

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Dr Antony Theodore 14 September 2010

but at every single moment of time earth seems illuminated by some spectacular hearts liked these lines dear Shirin.... you are poetic. lot of good ideas in ur poem. thank you for sharing.

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