Hell Or Heaven Poem by tabasom azadee

i have some suggestions re improving the English in these lines, but i won't make suggestions unless you ask me. and I cant find their boundary come back before my became freeze or my heaven became burn of Feeling lonely bri ;)

I feel cold I feel the heat and I cant find their boundary.... exquisite expression of intense feeling....... you have a sensual feeling heart. nice poem.. like reading u.. dev

Hell or heaven, freeze or burn in practical life, nothing but what you play with, thin your own mind. In poetic mind however, they may create mental mosaic patterns in reader's mind. Thanks for sharing.

come back please before my sufferings destroy me......... very nice theme. thank you dear poet.