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Hell (SCARY)

Jet black sea of doom
Found outside the gates of hell
Where babies rcok in little cradels
Did they get what they deserved
To be dead, to be so lost

Jet back sea of doom (just rot just rot)
Hear the screams of those drowning (save me save me)
The creeking cradels where one hopes to sleep
The chill outside the musaleam door
Froze your soul and broke it (welcome to hell)

Cross the sea, cross the sea, cross the sea
Be at war with what you can do
You didn't know it would be this hard to save a life
Just look where you are now
Welcome to hell

See fires burning down the gates
Kill me, Kill me now, Kill me (already dead)
You never knew how great you had it....
But now, you're dead

Submitted: Saturday, February 21, 2009
Edited: Saturday, February 21, 2009


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  • Christine Kerr (2/21/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    Your right it is scary, Very well written tho, Keep it up

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