hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,580 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Hello - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

She appeared from no where to say “hello”
I was in dilemma whether to retrace or follow
But she was special to me in many respects
I had to restrain as she was busy with religious act

“You are now rare entity” I complained
“Even rarer than almighty” I maintained
I could not make out what she had in mind
I peeped more with her to find

I have kind affection
It is some sort of new relation
Neither have I had given name
Nor made any reference or claim

“She may reject straight away” I fear
“I move with and find cautious way”
But I know from heart that she too feels
Wants to talk and remain with me at will

It is magnificent pull
At present there prevails lull
But to certain extent it is successful
As she comes often to make me joyful

I have opened up like fresh flower
With petals as if to welcome and offer
Extend wishes and make known the desire
I fear she may not admire

I believe “where there is will there is way”
Even though she may be far and away
I have natural feeling and attachment
I shall wait for to come and personally comment


Comments about Hello by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    Very Nice Poem


    Linda Murray28 minutes ago
    Very Good write, sounds as though you are amused with a muse, whom will enhance your poetic field of flowers
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  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 9:39:00 AM)

    Rimjhim Tyagi48 minutes ago
    I likeds reasding your poem.......Thanks for sharing......! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 8:49:00 AM)

    Shoutevenshy
    I like this one :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 8:48:00 AM)

    Fresh Flower


    Jawahar GuptaLess than a minute ago
    “You are now rare entity” I complained
    “Even rarer than almighty” I maintained

    Very nice!
    i liked it,
    Comment +1
    very nice (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 8:44:00 AM)

    very nice

    Kirsten NoirLess than a minute ago
    good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 8:32:00 AM)

    No...its luvly., poets i always free to fly beyon horizn u knw, .its the imaginatn wat counts in poetry! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/28/2013 8:32:00 AM)

    She appeared from no where to say “hello”
    I was in dilemma whether to retrace or follow (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 28, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 30, 2013


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