! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... Hello …..Hello....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ... Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ..... Hello …..Hello....! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ...

Rating: 4.9


HELLO …..HELLO....

frog is away from falling bridge
lest it may suffer creases of fall
as it jumps over the fall by mirth
cry of falling rebounds the frog

we laugh loud by our own dwarf shadows
lest shadow may enroll us in livid grime
light still burns shadow even in eclipse
semblance swaddles across dwarfism

grace eclectic rumbles by grimace
as thought elastic ambles in green
ocean stoops over blue being deep
frog still resounds grin beneath green

tear saddles faster by sorrow
night breaths deep in apprehension
beauty of love entices upon blue
I or you call me always hello, hello.....! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynne Howard 18 November 2008

Well written. Thanks for sharing your talent!

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Meggie Gultiano 18 November 2008

a very, very good write!

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Chitra - 19 November 2008

a combination of fine perception and a strong theme 10+

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Sandra Fowler 19 November 2008

You are always to be commended for your rich use of simile and metaphor. From your window on the world, you see images of amazing originality. Excellent, Dr. Kar. Giving you 10 is a pleasure. Warm regards, Sandra

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Mary Das 19 November 2008

Hi, a well written poem. Some sense of humour in it. Liked it much. Take care.

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Rabi Anata 06 July 2009

I especially love the use of colors in the poem. Very beautiful, start to finish.: } 10! !

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Marieta Maglas 01 July 2009

I like this tear of green sadness, so subtly visible in the ocean of blue life.wonderful poem...10+++

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Ashraful Musaddeq 26 May 2009

A beautiful poem with beautiful imagery. Amazing 10+

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Catrina Heart 11 February 2009

A very nice poem written in excellence...with a simple title though have a very deep mening and context...crafted with zeal...10+++

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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2008

Your frog entrances, your use of color hypnotizes, your love of language is par excellence. Yes, indeed. Your poetry fascinates. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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