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Hello Sailor!

His six pack gradually hid itself
under his pot belly as he slid into old age.
He could rest his tea on it and a sandwich -
it was quite a handy shelf!

Of course, it remained a six pack
well, in his eyes, and who was I to enlighten him.
We'd both decided, without a word
that it was there, deep down.

Yes it was where we couldn't see it,
out of sight, ready to spring back into action
should the new diet work
and as I loved him, I didn't really care

but often, in the afternoons, when the sun goes down,
I stroke his rowing machine in the corner
and wonder - if he'll ever ride the waves
of the big bad ship again.

Submitted: Wednesday, July 25, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, August 01, 2012


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  • Danny Draper (9/17/2012 3:10:00 AM)

    Great stuff, you've got us blokes pegged. The saucy ambiguity of the last verse was not lost at sea.

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  • Karen Sinclair (7/25/2012 12:13:00 PM)

    HAHAHAHA! just what the doctor ordered....ruddy heck ruth you must of known i was right in the dull drums but luckily you dragged me out grinning :) cheers hunny first time ive laughed today x

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