Fay Slimm

(Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

Help Me.


Help me appreciate love.
The commitment to care.
In the comfort-zone, where
Two hearts live life love would approve.

Help me appreciate trust
In realms of true words
Where doubt seldom occurs
And hope's never trampled to dust.

Help me appreciate life.
There's some place where no lies
Ever darken love's skies.
As peace spreads warm wings over strife.

Help me start
LIVING
again.

Submitted: Tuesday, August 05, 2008

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  • J Lee (8/15/2008 4:05:00 AM)

    With love comes commitment
    With commitment there must be
    trust & no doubt
    If there's doubt there will be no peace
    You really do write very good poem
    tis going to my fav poems (Report) Reply

  • marvin brato (8/14/2008 12:05:00 AM)

    Hold on to what makes you happy... live your life each day as if its your last by making the most out of it! Do not live in the past nor the future, live today because the moment is now!
    A 10. (Report) Reply

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