Help Me Stand Poem by Asif Baloch

Help Me Stand

Rating: 5.0


Help me stand on
My feet
Walk few steps then
Just leave
Leave some marks on
My soul
With some love fill
This hole
Thoughts of love and
Feelings of pain
Runs like venom
In my veins
Reborn every night
And die every day
The tears of blood
My heart sheds in dismay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Melvin Banggollay 14 September 2008

a heartfelt manifestation of your deepest emotions as a truly passionate poet of our times. Great write take care, melvin

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Sathyanarayana M V S 13 September 2008

Terrific feelings...beautiful expressions........10

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 13 September 2008

This is a wonderful poem, Sir. Thanks for sharing it.

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Chitra - 07 September 2008

a strong plea to regain inner strength which is lost day in and day out

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Kesav Easwaran 06 September 2008

a good and sincere request to HIM who must heed...the line- Reborn.... is really good... poem short but beautifully insightful 10

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