Her Dreams Poem by Charles M Moore

Her Dreams

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Her dreams came from a luxury
enamelled in her heart
like diamonds spread in front of me
each one a work of art
to choose would be a sacrifice
to all that she had said
I fashioned them into a crown
and placed it on her head.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Ori 24 June 2006

You know what I like about your poems, Charlie - they are crisp and clear and uncomplicated - a pleasant enjoyment for the reader! I hate having to read and reread and still wonder what a poem is about. Yours are a treasure! Linda

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David Gerardino 10 June 2006

like diamonds spread in front of me each one a work of art, THIS IS A GREAT LINE..

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Patricia Gale 10 June 2006

Must have been some lovely dreams. Well done with care Patricia

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Charles M Moore

Charles M Moore

Glasgow Scotland.
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