Luwi Habte

Rookie (19 march / Asmara)

Her Kindness... - Poem by Luwi Habte

Dedicated to my sister

there is one lady
she is little but earnest surely
her advice is valuable and sweet
she is lovely. by noone to be hated

that pretty lady of one family
is keen enough and sincerly
every body likes her
from children to old people at all

her kind performance
might help her after death
so very careful for things
she let peace instead of terrible stuffs

if the whole world was paper
and the whole oceans were ink
that will never be enough for you
my beloved lady samu

S entimental

E lated

M ajestic

H earten

A dorable

R efined

love ya semhar


Comments about Her Kindness... by Luwi Habte

  • Gold Star - 44,856 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/30/2009 12:29:00 PM)

    the whole world was paper
    and the whole oceans were ink
    that will never be enough for you
    my beloved lady samu..... feelings rightly expressed in simple terms.. i like it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Tom Golding (6/23/2009 10:08:00 PM)

    A lovely dedication to a respected elder. But once more spelling and grammer distracted me (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (6/14/2009 1:34:00 PM)

    'if the whole world was paper
    and the whole oceans were ink'

    Nice and lovely poem. Love it,10+++ (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, June 14, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, December 7, 2011


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