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Gothic Fairy Princess

(08/14/92 / Salinas, California, United States)

Her life


She had a life she used to know,
Now her life is going down,
I hate to see dreaded pain,
Now her life is going insane.

She used to love her normal life,
Without those yelling and fights,
Everything was so possible,
Before everything turned up-right.

Her world slowly changed,
Family and friend relation,
School grades are slowly failing,
Teachers, friends, and parents are soon noticing.

Her clthes are changing,
Her personality too,
From playful to emo,
What can we do to help her out.

Her friends are worried,
Her family is scared,
She doesn't care,
She just thinks no one cares for her.

Her mother wonders why shw hasn't been out,
Her sister wonders why she hasn't been eating,
Her friends wonder why she hasn't been out at school,
Her step-dad wonders why the house is a mess.

Her mother gets fed up with her after a month,
Her friends are thinking craqzy things,
Her sister doesn't know whats happening,
Her friends goes in her room and scream to what they see.

Her mother cries in misery for her oldest daughter,
Her friends cries in shock for her/his playful friend,
Her sister cries in pain for her oldest sister,
Her step-dad cries in hurt for his oldest step-daughter.

The dreaded hurt,
From the mother,
Of the death,
For her oldest daughter.

The biggest depression,
From her friends,
Of the death,
For their playful friend.

The saddest day,
For the youngest sister,
Because of the death,
Of her only sister.

Submitted: Saturday, June 13, 2009

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  • ~ Jon London ~ (6/14/2009 4:59:00 AM)

    A very honest piece written with flowing ink, the depth of emotion is there through out...well expressed (Report) Reply

  • Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (6/13/2009 9:25:00 PM)

    What went wrong need to be relooked. Death isn't the solution to end all matters, cuz only those with poor mind will end up losing the battle.Anyway nice writes Michelle. (Report) Reply

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