Her Love Poem by MUSAWIR RAAKH

Her Love

Rating: 4.3


Her love was like RAIN
Meant to STOP
Meant to TOP
Meant to DROP

Her love was like WIND
Could not be CLOCKED
Could not be LOCKED
Could not be BLOCKED

Her love was like RAINBOW
Could not be CHASED
Could not be GAZED
Could not be PRAISED

Her love was like FIRE
Always BURN
Always CONCERN
Always SPURN

Her love was like FANTASY
No REALITY
No CLARITY
No ETHNICITY

Her Love
Friday, November 13, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: romance
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shakil Ahmed 13 November 2015

her love was like rain and i hope this rain will shower upon you, thanks for sharing.

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Musawir Raakh 13 November 2015

Thanks brother, hoping the same for you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 November 2015

Love drops like rain. Wonderful imagination definitely shared in this love poem with romantic mind....10

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Musawir Raakh 13 November 2015

Your comments are always welcomed, loved your 'life has a meaning, thanks

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Chinedu Dike 04 December 2015

Beautiful depiction of the almighty feeling of love - a spiritual experience that is whimsical and temperamental, well articulated and insightfully penned in good rhyme scheme with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Raakh. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Souren Mondal 20 November 2015

Interestin poem Musawir... The VERBS, and then the NOUNS are the key here I guess.. Well penned... Thanks for sharing..,

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B Farbe 19 November 2015

Gud rhyming scheme... the poem is also gud... please m new, check out my poems as well

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Free Bird 14 November 2015

Nice poem full of sentiments and pretty rhymes. I invite you to read my poems.

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Paul Warren 13 November 2015

Nicely structured I liked it - thankyou

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Musawir Raakh 13 November 2015

Thanks dear P W, really appreciated your comment

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