Her Only Wish Poem by Jazlle D. H. **contentment is the key to happiness

Her Only Wish

Rating: 4.1


To izhai and Emz


She hoped she can remember the time
When their roads crossed unexpectedly
In the middle of her long journey
She paused for a while and gazed at him
He smiled and offered his friendly hand
They shared many points of views in life
Their needs and their longing jibe together
As time passed by pausing for a while
She forgot to continue her flight
For she was completely slumbered
She cut the tie and cross the border
Enjoyed each moment in the cloud nine
One day she was fully awaken
When cold water splashed on her face
She never wants to see him again
She doesn’t want to pick up the phone
And hear his sweet voice she can’t resist
She doesn’t want to check her emails
And read how much he’s been missing her
All she wants to do now is to ask him
To stop caring and loving her much
She even wants to cut the foliage
And bring to an end the growing love
While she still care and understand
Go and restart with their happy soul
To leave the dark cave they went before!


21st August 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ashraful Musaddeq 11 September 2008

It is really a beautiful poem!

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John Raubenheimer 25 August 2008

An effort of will, to write the poem, to make the break!

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Ency Bearis 24 August 2008

an implication of break up of relationship..need to end...a daring thoughts... Ency Bearis

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Tia Maria 21 August 2008

Very moving, very tragic.... who needs that kind of love!

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Kris Smith 21 August 2008

A touching if sad poem the content holds a lot of thought thankyou Chris 10

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