^ Her Pride Poem by mandara pookal

^ Her Pride

Rating: 3.3


She's soft as a feather
Spilling with pride
Sailing smooth waters
A swan that just glides

She's rave as the winter
Chilled and quite strong
She admits her follies
Sometimes she is wrong

She's cool as the summer breeze
No talking in haste
She manages the scene well
No hurry no waste

She's funny and witty
Call her a super clown
She's cautious and serene now
Ne'er takes things sitting down

She's early at sunrise
Some pure thoughts that gleam
A crystal clear sweetness
She spells out in streams

She's happy and content too
Quite rare find just now
So humble and merry
Call her a sweet dove

She's patient and passionate
A need that's divine
Her wants are so simple
Her thoughts to intertwine

She's thoughtful and eloquent
Woos man with great pride
To deal with a pleasure
She's honest on her side

She's quiet and quite silent
As watches and waits
Other's feelings she owns well
Her poems she creates

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 02 May 2022

Revisiting your piece. Yes, a sweet Dove indeed!

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Indira Renganathan 18 December 2009

I'm reminded of those ending lines of a nursery rhyme'mother's pet, lovely too, is that you? ...no doubt, you're becomming everybody's pet....a nice adorable poem...and what is mandara poo in tamil...thank you

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Ranjit Ravindran 12 December 2009

Wow..Lovely Lady is she.

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Kesav Easwaran 07 December 2009

you have very eloquently portrayed that 'she' of yours and her pride, Mandara...a wonderful she, she must be! the poem well versed, the words just glide over the lines swan like, on a serene pond-face...as an outsider, i feel this write contain telling indicative imageries! 10

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Ravi Sathasivam 06 December 2009

'She's early at sunrise Some pure thoughts that gleam A crystal clear sweetness She spells out in streams...' That's beautiful write. Well penned Enjoyed reading it 10+

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