# # Her Smile Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# # Her Smile

Rating: 4.0


set of pearls glitter
two moons smother me with love
she gives me a smile

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Poewhit 03 June 2009

That smile can say it all.

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Reshma Ramesh 04 June 2009

hehe good to be smothered in love.......well penned

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thisi s a perfect senryu. it is of such lines that good senryus are made....................

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Lady Grace 04 June 2009

her smile is as sweet as it is described here..grace

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Kranthi Pothineni 04 June 2009

I don't know who it is...but your write made me smile. Nice one.

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~ Jon London ~ 02 July 2009

Sam, nice way of expressing this loving moment bro...keep them coming

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rago rago 29 June 2009

a poetic expressions and divulged the art in yur own fashion......

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Raj Arumugam 20 June 2009

very concise and strong poem of love

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Vidi Writes 14 June 2009

Dear poet... Lets enjoy a bit of wit... We all know opposite attracts. Cute going...

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 11 June 2009

set of pearls glitter> sets of pearls glitter or a set of pearls glitters. nicely done. shan

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