hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,464 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Her Wisdom - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I turned down her proposal
As it needed quick disposal
She was making it conditional
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Comments about Her Wisdom by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2013 12:52:00 AM)

    Interesting!

    Susan D3 minutes ago
    Although I found it hard to follow in places, I liked this for it's subject matter and occasional rhymes. It made me think and relate it to the condition of women today and I liked that. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2013 12:47:00 AM)

    good


    Jon Otano2 minutes ago
    nice work
    Comment +1
    good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2013 12:46:00 AM)

    Kimberly McLemore-Carroll2 minutes ago
    very nice
    Comment +1
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  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2013 12:46:00 AM)

    Mamun Haque2 minutes ago
    Good for reading. Good work and I enjoyed it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,464 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/25/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    I turned down her proposal
    As it needed quick disposal (Report) Reply








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