Herb's Garden Poem by Dee Daffodil

Herb's Garden

Rating: 4.0


Down in Herb's garden,
At the back of my house,
The ladies were giggling,
Making fun of a mouse.

You see, poor wee mousy,
Was tempted to nibble,
And met with Sir Chives,
A pungent, young fellow.

It appears that one taste,
Was all he could manage.
Bit off more than he could chew,
And went off to find cabbage.

The ladies, Rosemary,
And sweet Marjoram too.
Got bored and lost interest,
Having nothing to do.

Sir Chives, being bold,
And not, mild mannered,
Picked a fight with Sir Basil,
Who was always enamoured.

Sir Chives tried his best,
Fought strong and with rage.
Sir Basil, our hero,
Was more of a sage.

The ladies,
They worried,
They fretted,
They pondered.

Who would survive,
This battle,
Sir Chives, the pungent,
Or Sir Basil, our hero.

Well, in the end,
It was Sir Basil who won,
For the ladies dear,
Felt strongly for him.

So the morale my friends,
Is simply this.
Strength and virility,
Are virtues, yes,

But, sometimes, it is wisdom,
That wins over might.
The gift of Thyme,
That wins the fight.

-Written by Dee Daffodil (H.W May 12,2006)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Man, this poem makes me want Trout! Fun poem, Dee!

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Duncan Wyllie 12 May 2006

A poem full of fun and told so well, Love duncan X

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Chuck Audette 15 May 2006

Are you sure that it was a mousebite and not a catnip? oh well, no big dill. Fun idea for this one! -chuck

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Alfredo Jacques 11 January 2007

I just want to tell this is a great poem and those are all my favorites to cook and I love the way the poem comes together.

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Barry Van Allen 11 January 2007

Dee, You are not even ashamed of what you have done, are you ? I was going to pepper this with comments about how mint I thought that this was! But, I will not pour salt into the wound!

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David Darbyshire 24 July 2006

who got Rosemary? ah what a nice poem Dee, well daone dave xxx

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gone gone 04 July 2006

'tis fun, Dee, Chervil give me a giggle each on each reading.....savory stuff Love, D.

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DEE DAFFODIL...YOU ARE A BLOSSOM OF CREATIVE VERSE ON THIS ONE METER, RHYME &(THYME) ALL IN SYNC...AND YOU ARE RIGHT..THYME/TIME IS ALWAYS THE PREVAILER IN THE END! NICE WRITE... ''''''''''''''''''''''''''''~F. J. R.~''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''

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