Here I Am (2nd Version) Poem by Unwritten Soul

Here I Am (2nd Version)

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Why do you sit alone
Like i am invisible
Are you forget..
I am here to be with you
In everything we do
We always together to survive
The smiles on your face
Or sad covered by the maze
We still stand togetherness
Cause i am here with you

Open and free your hand
Dont press the thorn in your palm again
Perhaps i cant really feel but maybe i can peel
This just a few life hard start
More challenge next part
Never give up
Just climb barrier wall
Never think of how tall
Trust me, will catch anytime if u fall
Keep build your ambition tall
My words wrapped no honey
My words made for your glory
When i said I am here for you
Dont doubt me, it's true

Bruises wound stained kiss on your vein
Let the dirty blood flew out your pain
Bring out your bitterness to drain
Just awhile and scars just remind you
About the past and what you will gain
Underneath you the skin dividing anew
Nothing will pinch your flesh for long
If you protect your body with faith and spirit
If you still bleeding and whenever u in need
Here i am to bandage your wound again
But dont doubt in me
You must believe me

If you trust me
Moon never hides behind the clouds forever
The night lose a crown if moon not come over
Your presence in this darkness around
Equally a moon shining light on the ground
Wear your crown tonight
It's wrong and wrong...
Dont compare moon with sun
Should i remind you
Night absence if sun presence
There's no use to compare the light
As the moonlight derived from original sunshine
So dont hide behind the clouds, give your spirit shine
Dont tell me the moon comfort behind the clouds
Your hidden potential will unleashes secret proud

Listen if you believe me
Look here, there or anywhere
But your face must only toward the light
Then you find a way easy the bright
Look there, here and anywhere
But dont choose turn back to the dark
Nothing you will gain but think of bad luck

If you there
Cry for mystery fears
Give me a cup of your salty tears
Then if you smile with sincere
Treat me with your sweet candy cheers
Just dare to share anything, mind clear
But if you fall
Anytime u call
Here I am for you
I said it all true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jinal Oswal 25 August 2011

You writing is amazing! ! 'Never give up Just climb barrier wall Never think of how tall Trust me, will catch anytime if u fall'... Too good. Good Luck :)

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Allemagne Roßmann 11 September 2011

Superb innovation.Simply hallmark poetry.Brian Adams must have been jealous of this have had he known.Well written once again.

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Mj Lemon 22 April 2018

Such an inspirational message. The first half of this strikes me as the reminder of what it means to be together....the power of more than one. The poem then reveals what happens when those bonds dwindle or forgetfulness sets in....only to end on the reminder of the power of togetherness. As has been observed.....'truly uplifting', Soul.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2017

It is a beautiful poem on love where a lover has plea to beloved to continue reciprocation. He says with many examples. Let be quote some.. Dont compare moon with sun Should i remind you Night absence if sun presence There's no use to compare the light As the moonlight derived from original sunshine So dont hide behind the clouds, give your spirit shine Dont tell me the moon comfort behind the clouds Your hidden potential will unleashes secret proud Beautifully crafted. Thanks for sharing.

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Christopher Tye 15 September 2016

Wonderful poem, life often has a lot of pain and hurt along it's path.

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 June 2016

Open and free your hand! For i am around to help. Thanks for sharing.

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Frank James Davis 23 April 2013

Endearing encouragement with sworn-to loyalty. Gratifying, truly heartwarming work, Soul.

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