Here, In This Beautiful Moment Poem by Valerie Dohren

Here, In This Beautiful Moment

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Here, in this beautiful moment,
slipping away from the world -
steeped in this glorious season,
shackles of earth now unfurled.

Rising above all that binds me,
lost in the star-sequined night -
turning my eyes on the moon-glow,
seeking a path to the light.

Still, in this wonderful moment,
scanning the darkness around -
closing my eyes to all sadness,
touching the dreams I have found.

Tuesday, January 6, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: Hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 11 January 2015

Shackles of earth now unfurled and touching the dreams you have found...... I feel this is a second beginning! Beautiful write, Valerie! Enjoyed much!

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Hans Vr 09 January 2015

A wonderful poem, Val. I love the great talent you display in all of your poems. They are full of feeling and so touchable by the reader. Excellent. I wish you all the best for this new year,2015.

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Dee Corpolongo 11 January 2015

Beautiful Val, the description of a moment in time....and a new beginning with much reason and rhyme! I also wrote another poem for you for your birthday~ hope you like it.....{{{hugs}}} and blessings always

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Dave Walker 16 January 2015

A wonderful poem, sometimes we need the peace of silence, nothing but calm.

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Lyn Paul 09 January 2015

Dear Valerie. You have made me feel like you have written these most beautiful words..... Just for ME! ...OMG. So thank you for that. Bless you on January 13thxxxx

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Bursting with a beauty that is both rich and refreshing. Excellently expressed my friend. I will add this to my list of poems.

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Paul Brookes 01 May 2015

just beautiful perfection thanks great read BB

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Joseph Anderson 21 February 2015

Serene, soothing., uplifting and a genuine beauty. Much beauty in your wording. You are always a joy to read

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Joseph Anderson 21 February 2015

Serene, soothing., uplifting and a genuine beauty. Much beauty in your wording. You are always a joy to read

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Meena Mustafa 06 February 2015

Wow! another lovely poem Val.

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