Hero Poem by mariam elhag

Hero



when u r alone
with an empty dark heart
thinking of your hero
to come and save u from darkness

u will keep thinking along
if he would come or not
if he would listen to your heart
thinking and thinking and thinking

thinking with no hope
never know if he would come or no
until thinking drove u far
far far away from the world

so when u feel like hope is gone
no one hears u suffering from inside
no one know that u r about todie
and that loneliness is destroying u

just look inside u
then u finally see the truth
that a hero lies in u
a hero will take u from loneliness

come on be strong
u have waste so much
get up and enjoy your life
a happy no ending life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Omar Ibrahim 17 September 2009

a hero is inside every fellow...but it doesn't appear only if the person is in need for it......i remembered the famous song: i need a hero....he's gotta be strong he's gotta be fast.. a big 10 for this poem

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Barbara Terry 30 May 2009

I agree! ! ! We must be strong inside of ourselves to be the hero that we want to rescue us from the sadness and loneliness and fears that haunt us everyday. A 10+++++ and I echo what the others said too. Thank you for sharing this definite message that makes the reader think. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Ashraful Musaddeq 30 May 2009

'come on be strong u have waste so much get up and enjoy your life a happy no ending life' Love this beautiful poem with happy ending with my 10+++

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Merna Ibrahim 15 January 2009

you are a hero Mariam, I really got the idea.

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