Hi, My Name Is Depression Poem by Melissa Black

Hi, My Name Is Depression



Hollow screams echo hatred into the darkness.
Decay covers the blood in my guilt-filled eyes,
and I've taken every good thing in your life so
Misery can take your soul for a devastating ride.

Piercing knives engulf the rotting undead,
faded photographs flash back time.
Empty smiles and promises shatter your world;
Hi, my name is depression.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Hansford 08 May 2009

This clearly expresses what you need to say. The only (small) comment I would make would be that it is generally better not to use the last line as a title, as you lose a lot of the impact that this short line gives at the end.

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