Treasure Island

Jemima Rivas


hidden intentions


Hidden Intentions
You looked at me
I had no idea who you be
To me you be what you looked
My heart you taught you took
I was wrong; tis my song
Every time I think
I am glad I did not sink.

Submitted: Friday, July 26, 2013
Edited: Monday, July 29, 2013

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  • John Westlake (3/15/2014 5:14:00 PM)

    Feels almost like a song, that said it is better written than some songs I have heard. Well done (Report) Reply

  • George Price (7/26/2013 4:17:00 PM)

    This has a rather wonderful song-like quality to it; it sweeps and glides. Keep it up!
    Oh, and thanks for the comment, much appreciated!
    GHP (Report) Reply

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