Hidden Truth Poem by Ocean Myranda

Hidden Truth

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Everyone has a hidden truth,
Though some may not agree,
You don’t need to hire a sleuth,
This hidden truth is just for you and me.

Whenever we talk, my heart does flips,
Whenever I hear your voice, everything feels right,
Every time you say you love me, my heart beat skips,
Seeing you in my dreams, makes the darkness, light.

I don’t care if this sounds corny, just keep reading,
I know what my heart is feeling,
An endless flow of love that is bleeding,
Thanks to you, my heart is slowly healing.

Even though we are miles away,
My love for you makes you seem close,
To be with you is what I pray,
Knowing you’re here is why my heart glows.

I don’t know how else to express my feelings for you,
I hope you can understand how I feel,
Just the thought of you helps me not to be blue,
Some of the lines are corny, but you are the main reason why I am able to heal.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Hidden truth a contradictory wordings I think. Truth has transparency and visible in top to bottom. But a separate writing and very nice poem.

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Ocean Myranda 11 September 2008

Thanks! I'm glad you like it! Yeah, it is very true about the Hidden Truth that people have! I'm glad you agree with me. Thanks Again!

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Mustafa Basel 19 August 2008

' Everyone has a hidden truth, Though some may not agree' great defination.i am that kind of person.i hope time will heal your wounds but it's hard if you dont want. great job congraculations!

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