Hiding Under My Makeup Poem by Kasi Navadomskis

Hiding Under My Makeup

Rating: 4.5


Make up hides my feelings
Make up hides my face
So many layers of make up
My true colors can’t be traced
Feelings build up inside me
I’m ready to explode
I want someone to talk to
But no one sees my load
So I wash away the make up
And show my colors true
I see that someone cares for me
And makes me feel anew.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Stacey Watts 28 August 2008

Very good I love this we sometimes do hide our true selves.

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Keith Hendrickson 19 June 2009

nice flow. short but sweet does the trick sometimes... i cant wait to read more of your work..

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Tiera Parker 01 December 2008

wow awesome poem. i feel the exact same way..

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Carissa Mcbride 25 September 2008

that was beautiful. i wish i could take mine off.........................

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Howard Johnson 03 September 2008

Excellent penning, Kasi, enjoyed every word.

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Greenwolfe 1962 02 September 2008

I absolutely love this poem. I could give a dozen reasons why but that isn't necessary. Just think of why you like it and put me down for that. GW62

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