His Hand In Mine Poem by Marilyn Lott

His Hand In Mine

Rating: 5.0


I trudged my way across the land
I tried so hard to take a stand
Doing what the good book said
Sometimes veering off the road instead.

Begging "Lord, oh help me please"
Felt my tears while on bended knees
Loving some so hard to love
Still looking to Him up above.

"Do you hear me, Lord, for I'm not sure
Life sometimes is hard to endure
The work is steady year after year
To keep this pace I feel the fear."

But I keep Him close within my heart
I truly try to do my part
I think I'll win, with His hand in mine
Yes, I do think I will be just fine!

His Hand In Mine
Sunday, July 1, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Voice 20 July 2018

Well wriiten. I am of a different command but your poem has beauty.

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Tom Allport 20 July 2018

A poem of belief and trust and love! , .......wonderfully written Marilyn

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Thank you, Tom!

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valsa george 20 July 2018

With His hand in yours, you are sure to win! A poem of absolute dependence and firm trust in God's providence! A nice pick as poem of the day! Congrats!

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Marilyn Lott 20 July 2018

Valsa, I so appreciate you comment, thank you!

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Hassan Hayati 21 July 2018

Reinforcing trust and hope. there is always a new flicker of hope, and that light of hope makes you strong to stand the hardest moment, this is what I found here in this poem. congratulations for being chosen as Poem of the day.

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Practicing Poetess 21 July 2018

A testimony of your faith, appearing in poetic verse- - Lovely job on this! Inspiring, and rightfully deserving of Poem of the Day!

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Kelly Kurt 20 July 2018

Has god ever actually spoken to you? Have you ever wondered WHY you Believe? The hands I hold are human I understand why Even how The majority still deny their own eyes As long as it leads to peace and love I am with you

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Kim Barney 20 July 2018

Very nice, Marilyn. A truly uplifting, spiritual poem. Your faith is showing through. Congratulations on having this chosen as member poem of the day! Best one we've had in quite some time.

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Lyn Paul 20 July 2018

A Beautiful flow of positivity to start the day. There are times when we all need a hand.

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