His Heart Flooded With Tears Poem by Pirate Love Magic Man

This is a well-written piece though the flow could and will be better as time goes by. GW62

that's what happens when u don't cry and let ur self flood u start to drown and then u die...

I think Greenwolfe is wrong. The poem, spoken aloud, gives a great verbal picture. I loved it.

i really like it. very beautiful... i can tell you put your heart into this one!

... this poem is beautifully written, with excellent imagery and a tone of endearing sadness and an overwhelming sense of longing. The title fits very well with the flow of the poem, and the idea you captured and emotions you portrayed were well thought out and written nicely here. My favorite lines: The beating of his heart gurgled -faint with the struggles.... just wonderful... i could see everything, feel your pain... your sadness... just everything... really beautiful

The beating of his heart gurgled faint with the struggles Of every night without his true love nice lines, good image. sooo sad... but I love it! ! ! it is a good one.great job. Purkey Girl

full of emotions..expressing love to the truest feelings...very sad...infinite longing for someone dear....but who knows what's at the end of the rainbow.? .she is there waiting for you or near is the day she will come back and once again be with you...

A truly heartfelt sentiment.. It is hard when you are connected to someone and they are gone. I hope she returns and you can be truly happy again.. Life can be difficult at times but one must remember to keep looking for the ship in the horizon. Very good piece....