His Own Small Store Poem by Eric Cockrell

His Own Small Store

Rating: 3.0


he's just an old man...
working behind the counter
of his own small store
for forty years...

the young toughs
kept robbing him...
grabbing stuff off the shelves
and running...

threatening him,
and the old woman...
till they lived in fear
day and night...

then they went too far!
coming across the counter
and grabbing him by the collar:
'give me the money, old man! '

quick, and sudden,
the gunshot rings out...
the young tough falls
to the floor in a
puddle of blood...

now the old man's going to court
for excessive use of force,
and an unregistered handgun...

to the halls of justice,
sterile and cold...
the stench of dignity dying
fills the air...

and the hands on the clock
cant be turned back!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savano Istork 29 September 2012

Powerful. Realistic. I loved it. Your a great poet

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Jim Troy 01 September 2011

Now there is that Eric at his best....Circling the wagons.... to defend against the varmits of his old world..... Tellin it like it is cowboy.....way to go. Jim Troy

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Terence George Craddock 31 August 2011

poignant in sorrow, powerfully insightful, a scenario sadly not endemic to just one culture or country, justice has failed common people who cannot purchase lawyers who loophole powerful criminals to freedom 10+

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