Hold Me, Hold Me! Poem by Elizabeth Muller

Hold Me, Hold Me!

Rating: 5.0


Inside this body
is a trapped soul
Not to be seen
And no where to go
It's slowly dieing in this skin,
To feel my pain should be a sin.
To feel my pain should only be
Not for you but just for me
When will darkness ever cease?
The pain is stronger than the seas
My heart is pierced, my body's torn
My eyes, blood shot, my feet forlorn
Help me! Help me! I am dieing!
Hold me! Hold me! I am crying!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Morgan Balanaser 12 May 2010

I agree, this is definitely a ten. Not meaning to belittle your hardships but this is another wonderful poem.

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The Lost.. 26 September 2009

this poem is wonderfull..keep up the good work 10++

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