Holding Us Back Poem by Aiesha Freela

Holding Us Back

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Those men, holding us women back
Thinking we're not good enough
Thinking we're not smart enough
I hate the doubt

Because the reality is...we're better!

Those guys, holding us ladies back
Thinking we're not good enough
Thinking we're not pretty enough
I hate the doubt

Because the reality is...we're beautiful!

Those boys, holding us girls back
Thinking we're not good enough
Thinking we're not tough enough

But the reality is...WE'RE THE BEST!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 24 January 2008

Men this way and men that way as women are! A good write!

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Darlene Belcher 23 January 2008

that is so true! i like it. but see, some men are so much better. then others, just hard to find the right one, thats all.

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Aj Carter 23 January 2008

I like the poem, it is true, but not all men are that way and those are the men you should find.

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Aiesha Freela

Aiesha Freela

San Diego, California
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