Homeless Poem by kayla B. mitchell

Homeless

Rating: 5.0


I am alone in my own home
I have hatred and problems where they don’t belong
It should be love, peace and
Happiness an all the above
To live a long life
Well until my teenage years are gone
If I knew teen life was this hard
I would of past it
Skip to the next
Anything to move on
The feeling of pressure
To know the truth in life is scary
To know your child life was a fantasy
And the ones you hold the most died with it
To feel first love for a guy but
Accept the fact you won’t be with him to you die
To feel like everything been take away
But still have hope for a better day
To me is the feeling of homelessness
Instead of home sweet home to me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 11 May 2011

Nice poem. Rich in depth and imagery. Beautifully conceived. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Elena Sandu 11 May 2011

You are going to turn into a fine person, it is not bad to be homeless, now you can start to build own home.Search deep inside try find what would you like. The most important and most hard step already done, a search for love and peace that is the most right path to follow. Hope! that is what gives you wings, am glad you didn't loose it! Fly sweet Kayla, spread your wings and do whatever you wish but try to keep your hope for a better world filled with with love and peace. That is what we all of us wish for. Keep writing, I loved your poem, thank you for share,10 By the way all the best wishes for a week before birthday, same mine, just got a bigger bag for the stones to add..

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