Savita Tyagi


Honey Wave - Poem by Savita Tyagi

A soft breeze descended from open sky to surf across the ocean.
A honeyed wave surged from the heart of ocean to greet the wind.
For a brief moment wind embraced the wavelet, whispered its undying love for her
The moon, the open sky, and I were the witness of their tender love.
Before long the tempest, brewing in the darkness pushed the dancing wave down
The breeze swept across the waters,
Sweetness of past moment already fading in its memory
Oblivious of the crushed wave sinking in the dark chambers of sea
It mingled with sand and palm trees.


Comments about Honey Wave by Savita Tyagi

  • Gold Star - 9,226 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/26/2014 7:44:00 PM)

    Beautiful description of the sweet wave. Thank you for bringing this to my attention in your comment to my poem Maiden Wave.there is some similarity yet different. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 39,017 Points Akhtar Jawad (6/6/2014 11:40:00 AM)

    The creator and the destroyer are not two different persons, see the greatness of human heart who still loves the person, as the wave loved the wind. If you mean this I have followed your poem that is so much nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Adheez Van Der Beanthz (8/13/2013 2:19:00 AM)

    perfect imagery with sweet words
    your way to describe nature is awesome
    really enjoy to read it (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,101 Points Heather Wilkins (6/26/2013 10:28:00 AM)

    beautiful writing about nature. on the beach one of my favorite places. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (7/27/2012 4:54:00 AM)

    Beautiful title and well written description of a brief intoxicating sight.
    A moments of nature captured excellently by your flowing pen. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jay Yanni (3/11/2012 12:50:00 PM)

    beautiful poem. I was transported back to a beach in Pondycherry! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, March 11, 2012



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