Honey Wave Poem by Savita Tyagi

Honey Wave

Rating: 5.0


A soft breeze descended from open sky to surf across the ocean.
A honeyed wave surged from the heart of ocean to greet the wind.
For a brief moment wind embraced the wavelet, whispered its undying love for her
The moon, the open sky, and I were the witness of their tender love.
Before long the tempest, brewing in the darkness pushed the dancing wave down
The breeze swept across the waters,
Sweetness of past moment already fading in its memory
Oblivious of the crushed wave sinking in the dark chambers of sea
It mingled with sand and palm trees.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jay Yanni 11 March 2012

beautiful poem. I was transported back to a beach in Pondycherry!

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Captain Cur 27 July 2012

Beautiful title and well written description of a brief intoxicating sight. A moments of nature captured excellently by your flowing pen.

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Bri Edwards 09 March 2019

yeah, some honeyed waves** went from one sailor to another when i served aboard the ship U.S. PoemHunter! let's see: there was Savita (my favorite) , Valsa, Geeta, Bharati, and some whose names i have forgotten. ** " The United States Naval Reserve, better known as the WAVES, was the women's branch of the United States Naval Reserve during World War II." bri :) to MyPoemList

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 26 August 2014

Beautiful description of the sweet wave. Thank you for bringing this to my attention in your comment to my poem Maiden Wave.there is some similarity yet different.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 June 2014

The creator and the destroyer are not two different persons, see the greatness of human heart who still loves the person, as the wave loved the wind. If you mean this I have followed your poem that is so much nice.

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Adheez Van Der Beanthz 13 August 2013

perfect imagery with sweet words your way to describe nature is awesome really enjoy to read it

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Heather Wilkins 26 June 2013

beautiful writing about nature. on the beach one of my favorite places.

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