Amir Foroughi

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Hope - Poem by Amir Foroughi

Are you still there in the shadows
Beyond edge of heaven
Waiting for the bells
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Comments about Hope by Amir Foroughi

  • Silver Star - 3,371 Points Bernard Snyder (10/30/2014 2:07:00 PM)

    Great poem, Amir. 'Are you still there'...Very nice! Also, congrats on having this poem chosen as 'poem of the day'. Well-deserved. Best wishes! (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,224 Points Babatunde Aremu (10/30/2014 3:18:00 AM)

    Nice poem full of wonderful imagery. Thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,474 Points Paul Sebastian (10/30/2014 3:18:00 AM)

    Beautiful write! Where there's hope there is live. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 51,173 Points Akhtar Jawad (10/30/2014 2:42:00 AM)

    Are you still there?
    I see you the last dream
    Fog of black arcane sages
    One last kiss
    Are you still there?
    Are you still there?
    A beautiful poem on hope, hope that exists till the last beath! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 79 Points Emranor Reja (10/30/2013 3:40:00 AM)

    twinkle hope across the poem (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,669 Points Elena Sandu (10/31/2012 1:24:00 AM)

    Moving write, very alive..Maybe I could hear sound of hearts cracking, with each moment of silence. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 33 Points Mark Dillon (10/30/2012 5:42:00 PM)

    very good poem, once there is life there is always hope. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Koketso Nassy (10/30/2012 4:44:00 PM)

    Amir, you have without doubt touched the little child in of me... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Koketso Nassy (10/30/2012 4:43:00 PM)

    Amir Forougi ypu have without doubt touched the little child in of me... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mimi Mata (10/30/2012 4:06:00 PM)

    I love your imagery and usage of words 10++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lola Montez (10/30/2012 7:08:00 AM)

    28 X
    20 V
    19 I

    Hope should not have more questions (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,521 Points Unwritten Soul (10/5/2011 2:01:00 AM)

    Hope should not have more questions, afraid it turn doubt...Not wrong to have hope and but high hopes make sure dont make you down if you cant tie with your reality ropes..Amir, Dont be afraid of the future dont you ever...let your hope be part of you my friend, let it be...Because when you used to live in the dark and no hope inside, will going nowhere, static and sad never ending...time to move on, time to get all freedom..dream well Amir, dont ignore it and let it have some hope may you will find a way to back home :)
    ..You really talented, but now you stop writing...WHY? keep new piece coming :) Go on for new emotion, bright for sure..Have a great future my friend Amir_Unwritten Soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Aqeb Benazir (9/22/2011 12:45:00 PM)

    yet again a brilliant write. and the flow it's also very much obvious and much like a song. i like the rhymes too. well depicted! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 877 Points marvin brato (7/31/2009 4:57:00 AM)

    Hope only become visible once worked out! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (7/26/2009 9:21:00 AM)

    The shadows and dust, will be the guidance of our next life, when this life is doomed.Good job Amir! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 190 Points Leslie Alexis (heaven Is My Home) (7/25/2009 11:24:00 PM)

    It told me to tell you............ yes, its here
    when you wake in the morn....... proof (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (7/25/2009 11:17:00 AM)

    beautiful expressions used to describe hope (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 200 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/24/2009 10:49:00 PM)

    the only treasure we have hope (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (7/24/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    Yes, a hope is still there. Keep searching in the shadows beyond edge
    of heaven. Wonderful poem, Amir. Touched my heart. Keep sharing.
    Best Wishes
    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ~ Jon London ~ (7/24/2009 9:55:00 PM)

    Very written piece, intense and raw emotion.....keep'm coming (Report) Reply

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