Hope Poem by shakil ahmed

Hope

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Hope

We have to cross a thousand miles over the hot sand
In the hope of getting solid land
The path is muddy and zigzag way
We have to cross mountain, ocean and bay.
Some blessed hope may come in life
Midst of gloominess sun rays are still rife
Warriors are still ready for waging war
They do not care any hindrance or bar
Cloud will fall in the form of rain
Sun will shine in the sky again
The long and weary night will come to an end
Sun will peep in the horizon - it is the trend.

Wednesday, July 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Wes Vogler 12 November 2015

A ttaboy now didn't you enjoy the discipline of seeking good rhymes? fine job a 10

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Kanniappan Kanniappan 21 October 2015

Nice poem with a very good description of nature with excellent rhymes. I like it.

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shakil ahmed

shakil ahmed

Badarpur, Assam, India.
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