Hope Poem by Seamus O' Brian

Hope

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If hope were a knotted stick of wood
its gnarled length the difference between
my reach and my grasp, I'd lean upon it
with all my heart's unmeasured dreams.

If my life is the dust unsettled from
the crooks and jags of this stony path
unlikely infused with the breath of God
each heartbeat a footprint to oblivion's grasp,

If this pilgrim must wander the space between
the dream of heaven and the teeth of hell
to pace the lonely interval, the height of joy
the depth of pain; where angels sing and devils dwell,

Heaven and hell within, without
the demon inside worth two in the hand,
then give me a staff well-worn in its use
to a well-tended grave in an un-promised land.

Friday, August 18, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I generally do not comment on my own pieces, but sometimes even in the brightest sunlight a shadow can cross our vision. So it is with this piece of shadow. I will say that the last two lines contain probably the most significant meaning, reflecting a desire to take the staff of someone who has walked this journey, and though buried in what I will not consider my home, has left enough of a legacy that someone still cares about his grave. Such a journey I would also walk, but desire to lean upon the wisdom of someone who has gone before and chosen well.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 29 August 2017

Excellently composed and delivered. The use of the knotted stick and staff symbolizing both hope and inner wisdom. Life's journey, at times dull and fruitless, holds such immense promise as the reader wanders in and out of these marvelous lines.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 August 2017

If my life is the dust unsettled from the crooks and jags of this stony path unlikely infused with the breath of God..: Such beautiful lines bring devotion and deepness for God. From starting to ending every line values more here. About life this carries philosophy and we find heaven within. An amazing sharing is done here.10

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Rini Shibu 18 August 2017

Wow beautiful lines Seamus Lean upon the hearts unmeasured dreams.

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