Hope To Die! Poem by norchel baguanga

Hope To Die!

Rating: 4.0


The day I was drowning
of the situation I was thinking
about the time when you said
'Goodbye' without knowing
you've left my heart weeping.
This heart is now breaking.
How can it be fixed?
Now, my heart is bleeding.
That night while I was listening
to the song we used to sing,
I was feeling so down and nothing.
Hopeless and dying!

I have to do anything
to stop my heart beating.
I feel so used to what you've been doing.
Why did you lie?
You've played my heart's feelings.
Last time while I was walking down on the same
path we used to cross,
my heart was beating fast
because I've seen you smiling
with a guy holding your hand.
It's pretty hard to accept that I feel hurt.
Tears are all that's left in my heart.
Hope to die to feel nothing!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 25 September 2008

I recommend the poem because I thought the ending was well done. The rest of it was nothing special, but the ending made the reader feel the hurt. Grenwolfe 1962

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Norchel Baguanga 25 September 2008

^^, dOnT wOrRy! ! ! this is only what i felt last year ^^, ok i make one, but more emotion... LoL^^, sorry but this what i always thought......

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Manonton Dalan 15 September 2008

hey! hold on to that thought. the world is so beautiful to live in. get a new one... more beautiful one. she's out there close to you. write some more please. thanks for not dying. somebody needs you.

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