Hot And Then Cold And Then Hot Poem by Tanec Rayl

Hot And Then Cold And Then Hot

Rating: 5.0


we have been lead here
to this salt desert
where provisions are unobtainable
to fight this battle simply out of pique
daring not to take the initiative
retreating a foot before we advance an inch
rewarding good service
meticulously calculating the movements of the stars
hoarding fire
accommodating ourselves, ultimately
to the enemy

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ivan Donn Carswell 09 May 2007

It is an irony lost on most that the things you are implacably opposed to influence you more than any other. The statement here is brutally frank but poignantly accurate. Bravo! Rgds, Ivan

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