Hot One Poem by Ari Alsio

Hot One

Rating: 5.0


the sky was hazy
the sun loved the summer
my woman is hot

Saturday, October 31, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sriranji Aratisankar 12 August 2016

well written, interesting...10

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Amitava Sur 02 November 2015

Interesting write, enjoyed reading. Reminds me of Diana Palmer in Phantom series.

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Ari Alsio 03 November 2015

Thank you, thank you, yes, I enjoyed reading ;))

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M Asim Nehal 01 November 2015

Wow so well written.....10

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Ari Alsio 01 November 2015

A blind hen sometimes find a grain, thank you.

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