Hot Summer Love Poem by Cj Heck

Hot Summer Love

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Ahhh summer,
when the nights are hot
and love is even hotter.

There are memories
of a summer like that
down in the Florida Keys,
a whole block of time I call
the loving days,

racing our jet skis with the wind
to the outer islands for shells,
then docking at a tiki bar
for buffalo wings and
icy Coronas with lime.

But it was the nights...
I miss the nights the most,
when the perspiration was there
before the passion even began,
and the only thing that cooled after
was a dip in the emerald Gulf
and maybe a frozen marguerita, or two,

and overhead in the night sky,
heaven’s own stars shimmied
like diamonds strip-dancing
on the surface of the water.

Hot summer nights
in the loving days,
when the nights were hot
but love was even hotter.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chuck Audette 27 December 2006

Wow, I'm not sure which part I like better, the hot loving part or the hot tropical setting. I think the latter, for it's guarranteed to keep you warm for a lot longer. Beautiful write. -chuck

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 01 December 2006

C.J... from a gal currently living in Buffalo, it's hard to imagine anything being hot... but this poem sure does bring the temps right up... Loved it! -Eila

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Yeowza, CJ! My favorite verse: 'and overhead in the night sky, heaven’s own stars shimmied like diamonds strip-dancing on the surface of the water.' This poem, quite frankly, rocks. You go, Girl!

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Cj Heck

Cj Heck

Born in Columbus OH - living in Florida
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