Syeda Beenish Jalil

Rookie (9 October 1988 / Rawalpindi, Pakistan)

How Alone Am I - Poem by Syeda Beenish Jalil

The question is how alone am I?
In this world full of smiles
This melody of happy rhymes
The gateway of long gay miles
Runway of such colorful styles

The question is how alone am I?
The sunshine, till there is good
The world beside me stood
Tears of joy, sets my hood
Foreseeing that, what I could

The question is how alone am I?
Some times I wonder deep in my soul
What if my luck goes for a stroll
What if no longer am I so sure
Instead of flying I start to crawl
Many I know will glide away
Could they be blamed for not to stay
When chattering voices having nothing to say
When stars no longer guide my way

The question is how alone am I?
Those who stay by my side
And in me they still take pride
For me whose hands are open wide
They will then become my guide

The question is how alone am I?
Never alone shall I ever be
My God keeps an eye on me
And till I have my family
Never alone shall I ever be

Syeda Beenish Jalil, Pakistan


Comments about How Alone Am I by Syeda Beenish Jalil

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (5/31/2010 12:04:00 PM)

    The question is how alone am I?
    Some times I wonder deep in my soul
    What if my luck goes for a stroll
    What if no longer am I so sure
    Instead of flying I start to crawl
    Many I know will glide away
    Could they be blamed for not to stay
    When chattering voices having nothing to say
    When stars no longer guide my way

    what a meaningful and professionally written poem is this one. specially this stanza of poem is awesome and heart touching one..your talent should not let you feel lonely.. inspiring poetry is yours.. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Gautam Sen (2/22/2010 8:11:00 AM)

    Good self assessing one in a self questioning mode.
    Yes, no one on this earth is left alone, we're under Almighty's mighty care.

    keep it up. More I will read of yours.

    Gautam (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Naseer Ahmed Nasir (11/17/2009 1:41:00 AM)

    The question is not a new one; loneliness is the destiny of humankind since eternity. But you have given the answer in the last stanza of your poem. Your self-determination and self-discovery is admirable. Keep it up.
    Best Wishes

    Naseer (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (7/30/2009 5:21:00 AM)

    The question is how alone am I?
    Never alone shall I ever be
    My God keeps an eye on me
    And till I have my family
    Never alone shall I ever be

    what a sweet and prefessionally written within poetic frame... flow is melodic and the idea is quite impresive and like when you are ending your question of lonliness with having your God and family with you.. really a good poem..well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (7/13/2009 3:01:00 AM)

    meaningful write/fine to ponder on (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 72 Points Akram Saqib (6/19/2009 11:44:00 PM)

    a thought provoking idea in philosophic tone (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Ashraful Musaddeq (5/24/2009 12:26:00 PM)

    Yes, no one is alone, Allah is with us,10++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Charles Wanjohi (4/30/2009 2:27:00 AM)

    You are never alone even when on a lonesome path there is always somebody watching over you. This poem, very good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ravinder Malhotra (4/30/2009 2:25:00 AM)

    A nice choice of words to echo a question? How alone am I.......Keep up the effort. It's good (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 30, 2009



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