Ali Sabry

Rookie - 77 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

“How Can I Sleep Honey & I Left You Lonely & Sad Today”


-How can I have a nap or I could sleep and I left you lonely and sad today because of a tiny thing.
How can I make you sad and I am all to you from my birthday
How can I wait the morning to come to see you again to have your forgive
I will stand on my knees in front of you asking you to forgive me
How can I sleep and I left you sad
How can I sleep honey after this how
-Darling it was something not from me but this is the life it was only a word I didn’t mean it believe me honey you can forget it simply it needn’t to make yourself sad this much.
-It was all fault from me so forgive me please cause I don’t have anybody in this world except you honey, You are all my life.
I don't know from where this problem come for us
Why my tongue must talk with you in these petty things
With your going far away from me I will never wait a second
Honey I can't tolerance without seeing you beside me in all the time every day
How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
My eyes in every second of the time asking about you honey
I feel that my other half left me suddenly and I became without life and soul simply
My soul left me and stayed with you darling
-How can I wait the night to finish it to come to see you again cause I forget something named the patient and I can’t wait any more.
How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness

Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011

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  • Gold Star - 5,689 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/28/2014 2:24:00 AM)

    How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness
    A beautifully composed poem which comes from heart and touches the heart. Well expressed. Well done
    Cop Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Raluca Mitra (10/6/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    As said before, a poem from the heart. Reading is a bit difficult due to the fact that there is no solid punctuation to pause the flow of emotions.

    Sail Away with Ral (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,434 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/19/2014 10:30:00 PM)

    A poem full of emotions, lovely emotions, impressive and attractive, a well deseyed selection to be poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Kirti Sharma (7/12/2014 3:32:00 PM)

    one can't stay happy if one's beloved is sad..
    nicely writen...
    i like the last line...
    too deep... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,851 Points Patricia Grantham (7/12/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    A nice poem filled with love, passion and forgiveness
    or the lack of it thereof. But yet still there is still hope for a happy
    ending. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 773 Points Leslie Philibert (7/12/2014 4:40:00 AM)

    Nice poem from a troubled country, I wish all in the region peace and security.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 851 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (7/12/2014 2:47:00 AM)

    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness

    how can i?

    great write bro.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points S M Zia Hyder (7/12/2014 2:46:00 AM)

    How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness
    Nice and Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points J.s. Shankar (7/1/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Wow, amazing words are put forward in the poem to persuade your beloved...so instinct and genuine...amazing...friends u can rate my poems...I would like to know your point of view about my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points M. Shahid. H Chouhdry (7/5/2013 1:21:00 PM)

    You write well in free verse style, try to deviate from girl topics, introduce some rhythm in your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vineet Chhikara (6/12/2013 12:39:00 PM)

    @Ali sabry... a gud poem straight from d heart... i invite u check my poems and drop ur comments and rate them... i will be pleasured, , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Antimoni Dutta (6/3/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    the last line alone denotes the poet's deep feelings towards his lover. good work. wish u all the best (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nausheen Zaidi (4/22/2013 3:07:00 PM)

    True feelings written from heart strange how we tie our heart to our lover :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Jackie Osae (4/15/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    'My soul left me and stayed with you darling'...wow, you composed this poem in a way that it really feels real when reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Abie Arun (12/31/2012 11:37:00 PM)

    Aww...wonderful heart touching poem!
    A great poem to show how much you love her! !
    Well Done! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Rose Flores (11/29/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    Your poem has beautiful music...How can I sleep honey and I left you sad... keep writing! A blessed day! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sharifa Palmer (10/25/2012 3:56:00 PM)

    This is so beautiful and heartfelt. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kiara Davar (10/8/2012 3:14:00 PM)

    Omg, its so touching, I can actually feel what your going through...Keep writing :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 460 Points Matthias Pantaleon (8/25/2012 12:39:00 PM)

    GREAT POEM BY ALI.....KEEP THE PEN WRITING (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Allie Whitehead (7/26/2012 1:49:00 PM)

    omg this is soo good u can really write good job! ! (Report) Reply

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