Ali Sabry

Rookie - 140 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

“how Can I Sleep Honey & I Left You Lonely & Sad Today” - Poem by Ali Sabry

-How can I have a nap or I could sleep and I left you lonely and sad today because of a tiny thing.
How can I make you sad and I am all to you from my birthday
How can I wait the morning to come to see you again to have your forgive
I will stand on my knees in front of you asking you to forgive me
How can I sleep and I left you sad
How can I sleep honey after this how
-Darling it was something not from me but this is the life it was only a word I didn’t mean it believe me honey you can forget it simply it needn’t to make yourself sad this much.
-It was all fault from me so forgive me please cause I don’t have anybody in this world except you honey, You are all my life.
I don't know from where this problem come for us
Why my tongue must talk with you in these petty things
With your going far away from me I will never wait a second
Honey I can't tolerance without seeing you beside me in all the time every day
How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
My eyes in every second of the time asking about you honey
I feel that my other half left me suddenly and I became without life and soul simply
My soul left me and stayed with you darling
-How can I wait the night to finish it to come to see you again cause I forget something named the patient and I can’t wait any more.
How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness


Comments about “how Can I Sleep Honey & I Left You Lonely & Sad Today” by Ali Sabry

  • Rookie - 55 Points Pearl Walden (4/27/2015 2:16:00 PM)

    So sincere and beautifl, it is a happy joy to read. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 282 Points Sophy Chen (4/24/2015 8:42:00 PM)

    It is ture love. I admire you i had this kind of love in your life and it is priceless for people in love nowdays. Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 97 Points Sarojkanta Dash (4/20/2015 10:27:00 PM)

    intensity of feeling, pining love can be understood. however I would suggest agreeable use of language for easy communication. 'I can't tolerance', for instance, is not easy to accept. sry bt I am always free with friends. all the best! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 187 Points Lopamudra Mishra (4/20/2015 12:35:00 AM)

    so true to heart.nice dipiction of feelings, theme indicates atrue emotion, pls go through my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,340 Points Kewayne Wadley (4/16/2015 9:40:00 PM)

    This one stood one to me, very sincere. Heartfelt! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 792 Points Josey Alfred (4/15/2015 8:20:00 AM)

    A poem that flows from the heart is bound to be good, but a poem that is truly is from the SOUL is the tears from within. The longing to meet and look into her eyes to beg for forgiveness is so vivid no wonder you are bound to loose sleep. with best wishes,
    Josey Alfred (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,301 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/28/2014 2:24:00 AM)

    How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness
    A beautifully composed poem which comes from heart and touches the heart. Well expressed. Well done
    Cop Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Raluca Mitra (10/6/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    As said before, a poem from the heart. Reading is a bit difficult due to the fact that there is no solid punctuation to pause the flow of emotions.

    Sail Away with Ral (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,130 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/19/2014 10:30:00 PM)

    A poem full of emotions, lovely emotions, impressive and attractive, a well deseyed selection to be poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Kirti Sharma (7/12/2014 3:32:00 PM)

    one can't stay happy if one's beloved is sad..
    nicely writen...
    i like the last line...
    too deep... (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,911 Points Patricia Grantham (7/12/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    A nice poem filled with love, passion and forgiveness
    or the lack of it thereof. But yet still there is still hope for a happy
    ending. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 882 Points Leslie Philibert (7/12/2014 4:40:00 AM)

    Nice poem from a troubled country, I wish all in the region peace and security.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,092 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (7/12/2014 2:47:00 AM)

    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness

    how can i?

    great write bro.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points S M Zia Hyder (7/12/2014 2:46:00 AM)

    How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness
    Nice and Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points J.s. Shankar (7/1/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Wow, amazing words are put forward in the poem to persuade your beloved...so instinct and genuine...amazing...friends u can rate my poems...I would like to know your point of view about my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points M. Shahid. H Chouhdry (7/5/2013 1:21:00 PM)

    You write well in free verse style, try to deviate from girl topics, introduce some rhythm in your poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vineet Chhikara (6/12/2013 12:39:00 PM)

    @Ali sabry... a gud poem straight from d heart... i invite u check my poems and drop ur comments and rate them... i will be pleasured, , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Antimoni Dutta (6/3/2013 2:17:00 AM)

    the last line alone denotes the poet's deep feelings towards his lover. good work. wish u all the best (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Nausheen Zaidi (4/22/2013 3:07:00 PM)

    True feelings written from heart strange how we tie our heart to our lover :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 5 Points Jackie Osae (4/15/2013 1:51:00 PM)

    'My soul left me and stayed with you darling'...wow, you composed this poem in a way that it really feels real when reading it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, December 27, 2011



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