Ali Sabry

Rookie - 152 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

“how Can I Sleep Honey & I Left You Lonely & Sad Today” - Poem by Ali Sabry

-How can I have a nap or I could sleep and I left you lonely and sad today because of a tiny thing.
How can I make you sad and I am all to you from my birthday
How can I wait the morning to come to see you again to have your forgive
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Comments about “how Can I Sleep Honey & I Left You Lonely & Sad Today” by Ali Sabry

  • Rookie - 9 Points Mockingjay Mellark (5/3/2015 6:08:00 PM)

    Very nice writing, very touching (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 565 Points Sahra Hussein (5/1/2015 3:20:00 AM)

    it is really fantastic! ! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 565 Points Sahra Hussein (5/1/2015 3:07:00 AM)

    what a poem and good writing
    i really like it. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 704 Points Lajpat Chawla (4/30/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    My soul left me and stayed with you darling
    Good one. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 17 Points Abifarin Rafael da ola (4/29/2015 3:39:00 AM)

    you wrote a lovely poem. To be sincere that was quite encouraging (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 498 Points Pearl Walden (4/27/2015 2:16:00 PM)

    So sincere and beautifl, it is a happy joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 323 Points Sophy Chen (4/24/2015 8:42:00 PM)

    It is ture love. I admire you i had this kind of love in your life and it is priceless for people in love nowdays. Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 151 Points Sarojkanta Dash (4/20/2015 10:27:00 PM)

    intensity of feeling, pining love can be understood. however I would suggest agreeable use of language for easy communication. 'I can't tolerance', for instance, is not easy to accept. sry bt I am always free with friends. all the best! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,582 Points Kewayne Wadley (4/16/2015 9:40:00 PM)

    This one stood one to me, very sincere. Heartfelt! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,283 Points Josey Alfred (4/15/2015 8:20:00 AM)

    A poem that flows from the heart is bound to be good, but a poem that is truly is from the SOUL is the tears from within. The longing to meet and look into her eyes to beg for forgiveness is so vivid no wonder you are bound to loose sleep. with best wishes,
    Josey Alfred (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,548 Points Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/28/2014 2:24:00 AM)

    How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness
    A beautifully composed poem which comes from heart and touches the heart. Well expressed. Well done
    Cop Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 127 Points Raluca Mitra (10/6/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    As said before, a poem from the heart. Reading is a bit difficult due to the fact that there is no solid punctuation to pause the flow of emotions.

    Sail Away with Ral (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 31,384 Points Akhtar Jawad (9/19/2014 10:30:00 PM)

    A poem full of emotions, lovely emotions, impressive and attractive, a well deseyed selection to be poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 132 Points Kirti Sharma (7/12/2014 3:32:00 PM)

    one can't stay happy if one's beloved is sad..
    nicely writen...
    i like the last line...
    too deep... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,903 Points Patricia Grantham (7/12/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    A nice poem filled with love, passion and forgiveness
    or the lack of it thereof. But yet still there is still hope for a happy
    ending. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,102 Points Leslie Philibert (7/12/2014 4:40:00 AM)

    Nice poem from a troubled country, I wish all in the region peace and security.. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,888 Points Musfiq Us Shaleheen (7/12/2014 2:47:00 AM)

    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness

    how can i?

    great write bro.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points S M Zia Hyder (7/12/2014 2:46:00 AM)

    How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness
    Nice and Beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points J.s. Shankar (7/1/2014 9:01:00 PM)

    Wow, amazing words are put forward in the poem to persuade your beloved...so instinct and genuine...amazing...friends u can rate my poems...I would like to know your point of view about my poems. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points M. Shahid. H Chouhdry (7/5/2013 1:21:00 PM)

    You write well in free verse style, try to deviate from girl topics, introduce some rhythm in your poems. (Report) Reply










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