Ali Sabry

Gold Star - 7,233 Points (11/08/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

“how Can I Sleep Honey & I Left You Lonely & Sad Today” - Poem by Ali Sabry

-How can I have a nap or I could sleep and I left you lonely and sad today because of a tiny thing.
How can I make you sad and I am all to you from my birthday
How can I wait the morning to come to see you again to have your forgive
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Comments about “how Can I Sleep Honey & I Left You Lonely & Sad Today” by Ali Sabry

  • The Poet Poet (6/29/2016 11:32:00 AM)

    so many comments u earned being a LEO
    Since English is not your language
    hope you will edit your poetry
    'tis good but edit it needs Ali (Report) Reply

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  • Wairimu Kariuki (3/14/2016 1:00:00 AM)

    I can imagine your heartfelt sadness at leaving your beloved touching and real. Happens to all of least those who have a heart. We feel it when we make our loved ones sad. (Report) Reply

  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (2/10/2016 8:06:00 AM)

    Nicely penned, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Horse Lass Horse Lass (5/3/2015 6:08:00 PM)

    Very nice writing, very touching (Report) Reply

  • Sahra Hussein Sahra Hussein (5/1/2015 3:20:00 AM)

    it is really fantastic! ! (Report) Reply

  • Sahra Hussein Sahra Hussein (5/1/2015 3:07:00 AM)

    what a poem and good writing
    i really like it. (Report) Reply

  • Lajpat Chawla (4/30/2015 2:33:00 AM)

    My soul left me and stayed with you darling
    Good one. (Report) Reply

  • Abifarin Rafael Da Ola Abifarin Rafael Da Ola (4/29/2015 3:39:00 AM)

    you wrote a lovely poem. To be sincere that was quite encouraging (Report) Reply

  • Pearl Walden (4/27/2015 2:16:00 PM)

    So sincere and beautifl, it is a happy joy to read. (Report) Reply

  • Sophy Chen Sophy Chen (4/24/2015 8:42:00 PM)

    It is ture love. I admire you i had this kind of love in your life and it is priceless for people in love nowdays. Keep writing! (Report) Reply

  • Sarojkanta Dash Sarojkanta Dash (4/20/2015 10:27:00 PM)

    intensity of feeling, pining love can be understood. however I would suggest agreeable use of language for easy communication. 'I can't tolerance', for instance, is not easy to accept. sry bt I am always free with friends. all the best! (Report) Reply

  • Kewayne Wadley Kewayne Wadley (4/16/2015 9:40:00 PM)

    This one stood one to me, very sincere. Heartfelt! (Report) Reply

  • Josey Alfred Josey Alfred (4/15/2015 8:20:00 AM)

    A poem that flows from the heart is bound to be good, but a poem that is truly is from the SOUL is the tears from within. The longing to meet and look into her eyes to beg for forgiveness is so vivid no wonder you are bound to loose sleep. with best wishes,
    Josey Alfred (Report) Reply

  • Col Muhamad Khalid Khan Col Muhamad Khalid Khan (12/28/2014 2:24:00 AM)

    How can I wait the morning and come to see you again to have your forgive
    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness
    A beautifully composed poem which comes from heart and touches the heart. Well expressed. Well done
    Cop Muhammad Khalid Khan (Report) Reply

  • Raluca Mitra Raluca Mitra (10/6/2014 6:27:00 AM)

    As said before, a poem from the heart. Reading is a bit difficult due to the fact that there is no solid punctuation to pause the flow of emotions.

    Sail Away with Ral (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad Akhtar Jawad (9/19/2014 10:30:00 PM)

    A poem full of emotions, lovely emotions, impressive and attractive, a well deseyed selection to be poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Kirti Sharma (7/12/2014 3:32:00 PM)

    one can't stay happy if one's beloved is sad..
    nicely writen...
    i like the last line...
    too deep... (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham Patricia Grantham (7/12/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    A nice poem filled with love, passion and forgiveness
    or the lack of it thereof. But yet still there is still hope for a happy
    ending. Enjoyed. (Report) Reply

  • Leslie Philibert (7/12/2014 4:40:00 AM)

    Nice poem from a troubled country, I wish all in the region peace and security.. (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen Musfiq Us Shaleheen (7/12/2014 2:47:00 AM)

    How can I sleep honey and I left you sad with all my sadness

    how can i?

    great write bro.... (Report) Reply

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