duncan wyllie (19.10.68 / bradford on avon)

oh criminy, now I see why Elys told me to read you.
She says hello. This is write that appeals on several layers.
skill, emotion, the inclination for a reader to urge the underdog on to victory...
well done, poet

Gosh, an epic write Duncan and yet you kept the storyline flowing really well, A lovely tale and what I like to hear, a happy ending. Very well achieved.
Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

A brilliant and most inspiring write. Thank you for sharing this with us. Andrew '10'

Inspiring and heartwrenching. True poetry, Duncan!

~Ray

Duncan,

You poems bring inspiration to me, as I'm sure they do for many others. The subject of a dream that seems real intrigues me. I've had several myself that I do believe are messages.

Wowsa Wowsy Wow! Wow! What a great read, kind sir of the well written word!
Inspiration in its purist form! God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.

Wow! A great piece of detailed narration.

What a mystery and what a captivating piece of work to read. You've done well with this one. I liked it and the way you ended it too. EXCELLENT JOB! ! !

Where were you when I needed to hear all this? ? ? ? ? ? ? ....Why didnt anyone ever tell me? ? ? ...Where was everyone? ? ? ? ... duncan you really know what you are talking about....thank you for sharing this poem with me....love LeilaXXXX

Duncan, I looked at the size of this poem in dismay and said oh, help. But as I started to read, the message became ever so clear as one line ran into another. I read with the pace of a galloping horse across a meadow free. I couldn't stop for fear of falling before I reached the end. And when I reached the end the message read to me, was that of a magnificent poem of family unity. WOW, this was long as it was beautifully painted all the way. Thanks for pointing me in its direction today.
David